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Student Samples My Interest Corner :  Book Recomendation : Marley And Me  Recent Activity : I have been playing with my brother recently.  Favorite TV Show : iCarly  Favorite Sport : Softball  Favorite Song: party in the USA By :Miley Cyrus  Favorite Memory: when my grandma died from  being ill from some illnes  Favorite Color: Purple  ( updated 10/16/09)

 ​Reading Respones :  Dear classmates  Mliada has been taken from her family. I could not emagen being taken away from my family. She has been at a center  for two years and they renamed her Eva. I could not stay away from my family for two years. That day she and other girls  went in to town for the first time in two years. I would be so happy to get away from the center. They gave them new clothes <span style="color: #9f00ff; font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 110%;"> and a marke to buy stuff in town. I wonder why they were so nice that day? As soon as they got there her and Liesel went <span style="color: #9f00ff; font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 110%;"> to the candy store. I would love that candy if I haven had non seen two years. Then he saw a old women that looked like her babichka. <span style="color: #9f00ff; font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 110%;"> She saw the women and the women said "nazi, evil child". Eva said "no no" noding her head. Then Fraunlen Kruger came in <span style="color: #9f00ff; font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 110%;"> between them and hit the old women till she fell on the ground and the women screamed. I would be sad if that was my grandma. <span style="color: #9f00ff; font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 110%;"> And Eva never for get her scream.I would not forget it too. <span style="color: #9f00ff; font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 110%;"> sincercely, <span style="color: #9f00ff; font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 110%;"> Gabby

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<span style="color: #9f00ff; font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 110%;"> Mrs. Baker: I love that you are wondering while you are reading. Great Job! I changed the color of text on words that you misspelled. Check your capitalization.

<span style="color: #9f00ff; font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 110%;"> Reading Reponse: <span style="color: #9f00ff; font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 110%;"> Dear Milada, <span style="color: #9f00ff; font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 110%;"> From my research from two years I discovered that your father and your brother has been shot. I am really sorry. And your mother and grandmother has been send some where in Poland. The smell outside is probely the smell of smoke. I would say that smell smelled familler to you. I would also say that to NEVER give up hope of finding your family.NEVER think that you will NOT find your mother and grand mothe. Also the old lady you saw was probley your grandmother. I am also sorry about you having to be come a nazi. After all they are the pepole that killed your father and brother. Agin Iam really really really really sorry.

<span style="color: #9f00ff; font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 110%;"> Sincercely, <span style="color: #9f00ff; font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 110%;"> Investigator Gabby <span style="color: #9f00ff; font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 110%;"> (updated10/21/09) ​

(updated 12/10/09)

My New Year Resolitions Goals:

1.To not be so mean to my little brother.

2.Take more resposibelity for my cat.

3.To eat more healthy stuff.

4.To be more helpful around the house.

Learning

1. Learn more things about history.

2. Leran more thingsabout music.

3.To learn more things about science.

(updated 12/29/10)

My Interest Corner Book Recommendation: Percy Jackson Series Favorite Song: Ice by Lights Favorite Color: Green Favorite Animal: Bat Favorite Game: Dragon Ball Z Budokai Tenkaichi 3 (11/16/09)

Dear classmates, I can't imagine being takened away from your own family and your name changed. I would be so scared if that happened to me. I would have been so mad at Fravlien Kruger for hitting the old woman. I feel bad for the people who are in the center because they have been in there for two years.

Dear Milada I think your family is doing fine. I think the smell was smoke from the bombs because there were some buildings that were destroyed. Your family loves you very much and they miss you alot. Do not give up Milada be strong and do not give up hope.You will soon be with your family that loves you (10/20/09)

Carlos://I would also do that .The Nazi are mean.// (11/16/09) Damyan: There the meanest thing on Earth (my opinion).

(11/23/09) Seed Story <(^_^)>

Dylan:hi

Water Fight

My grandparents and parents had just left. I went outside and saw my brother. He had something in his hand. I was curious on what he had in his hand. When I got closer I saw that he had a bucket of water. He threw it at me. I was soaking wet. Then I got a cup full of water and threw it at him. Soon all of my cousins joined in. Everyone was throwing water at each other. It was a huge water fight. Then I got my cousin,Leslie,all wet. Then her sister,Carmen,looked angry at me. She started to chase me all over the house. I went up some stairs outside but I could not go back down because my cousin was waiting for me at the bottom. I tried to go down but she kept coming back up .I was very scared. I did not want to get wet again. I also did not want to jump off the stairs because I was probably twelve feet up. Then I made a foolhardy move. I ran down the stairs hoping I could get away from her. Then all my hopes went down the drain. My cousin got me. I was soaking wet. I couldn't believe that she got me. I was disappointed in myself because my cousin got me wet. Although I was soaking wet that was my best day ever in Mexico. This is the best story ever Carlos:I wish I was you <(!_!)>

New Years Resolutions 1) Read six hours 2) Better hand writing 3) Get better grades 4) Play with my dogs 5) Get better at soccer 6) Run faster 7) Beat Resident Evil 4